Quill Comments

a perfect piece of fitting that makes any thing real....you got the core of every life...... ready to surf the pain and joy receive what life may gives.... very beautiful piece of words, for us today....congratulation....God bless... a 10/10

The words u used in every line were very good and while reading could my heart could feel it.

A pleasureable read...many thanks

you used the quill to write this memorable poem.

In this worthless worthy world, the poet could find something worthy atlast. Well composed.

Makes one think about writing

In search of my lost freedom wonderful meditative poem 10+++++++++

amazing poem as always, I love your flow and i love the way your poems are so easy to read, and you make writing look and sound so easy and for that I say amazing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (10 and more)

The cut of heart break go as deep as you want it to go and last as long as you want it to last. Sometimes some part of our mind takes perverse pleasure in the pain of heartbreak and likes to wallow in the mud of sorrow.......anyway a good write with good rhymes...