Thursday, August 14, 2014

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A soldier,
An eagle feather.
Using the enemy's blood as ink,
He writes of war.
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Sana Olivia Hernandez
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Daniel Brick 14 August 2014

A beautiful, beautiful, NO, gorgeous poem, Sana! It is suffused with the tenderest feelings for each person's reason to write, your compassion for each one of them is so wonderful. Your command of compressed language, symbols, colors, amazing images is remarkable, And you still had a fountain of inspiration left. when you wrote about your own writing experience - AND WE CREATE A BETTER WORLD is absolutely the best closing line! ! I LOVE THIS POEM BOTH FOR ITS MESSAGE AND ITS CRAFT. I'm keeping this poem!

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Sana Olivia Hernandez

Sana Olivia Hernandez

Roseburg, Oregon
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