Sunday, October 28, 2012

Quietus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ever since I was born,
You have been with me
As I grew,
Your shadow over me lengthened
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Anita Sehgal
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Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

this is a beautifully written poem. he miracle of motherhood and the love.

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Antonio Liao 18 December 2012

great a mouth-watering smooth tears of the eyes, explosive in distance and blind beginning of my naval birth...so powerful that, in the absence of my Mother's birth, it seem that i vividly seen and picture -out the day when i was born....Excellent and God bless

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Phuentsho Wangdue 22 November 2012

Nice job..... me like it...

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Wahab Abdul 19 November 2012

beautiful poem i like it...

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Thobile Masondo 19 November 2012

What a beautiful piece

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Neela Nath Das 11 November 2012

I feel so. Great philosophy from a great poet. Loved the choice of words, the thought as well.

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Alex Medina 11 November 2012

I agree with this philosophy. Through a waterfall of powerful words, You wash us with the reason of Death's existence. Absolutely powerful.

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Walterrean Salley 11 November 2012

A poem of depth, infused by your deep sentiments, by which you compell others to feel your passion. Well penned.

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Efe Benjamin 11 November 2012

nice n touchin' composition, rilly inspirin..

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Paul Mwenelupembe 11 November 2012

Quite sad mood, but great write. I also invite you to my poem called Anxiety regards

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Chandra Thiagarajan 10 November 2012

A very great effusive poem, warm and moving, which echoes in the heart for a long time. Thanks and best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

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Terry O'leary 09 November 2012

Philosophically wise! Very nice work! Terry

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Valerie Dohren 08 November 2012

Beautiful poem, very poignant and meaningful.

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Valsa George 07 November 2012

'It was you who defined the nature of life as transitory, ephemeral, heart breakingly fragile' These lines are so wonderful! 'Without the fear of its loss, would I be able to cherish the nectar of life'- another great line! One of the beautiful poems on Death!

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Jahan Zeb 02 November 2012

Wow! this poem is incredible for its theme and message. It certainly reminds me of the sonnet 10 of John Donne. One short sleep past, we wake eternally, And Death shall be no more; Death, thou shalt die. I liked it very much...

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 November 2012

yet a greatest tribute to a departed soul light of love when blazes glory of shadow heart flinches over tomb of reminiscence eyes still ruffles groping silence laid in quietus, most poignant write with ingenuity 10++++, thanks for sharing

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Shahzia Batool 31 October 2012

You lay your hand at positive, this poem is the strong proof of that. There is an old golden saying, and so true that there is no guard of life as big as Death itself, for it doesn't come before its appointed hour...

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Babatunde Aremu 30 October 2012

Very philosophical. Great write, I like it

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