Friday, November 11, 2005

Quietly You Go Comments

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Quietly you go
Soft angel feathers
Envelope your soul
Carrying you away from us
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Wanda Swim Strunk
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Max Reif 11 November 2005

I tell you, you really create an atmosphere like an angel feather, so simply. I don't know how you do it! I found the word 'relative' clinking a little prosaically in this ethereal ambience. Don't know whether there's a better word...maybe 'family'.

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Lucy Burrow 11 November 2005

Wanda, this is lovely - and so heartfelt. Regards, Lucy

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Beautifully scribed!

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