Sunday, June 10, 2007

Quietly We Slept Here Comments

Rating: 5.0

quietly we slept here
subtly we leapt fear
choir's dream, we swept tears
from our eyes our eyes our eyes
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DAVIDIA KARTINA
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 November 2021

A lovely poem that soothes our hearts. Love the repeating rhymes 5 Stars full on Top! Make the poem powerful

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Pilar Mogollon 10 October 2015

I love the rhythm and the flow. I love that it doesn't read per fectly smoo thly. I like that I can feel it.

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