Quietly Waiting (Sonnet) Comments

Sadness turned suddenly into comedy! That's great! Taking turns with the false teeth. I like it. This poem is technically a sonnet. It does not follow the rhyme pattern of the Italian sonnet nor the English sonnet, but it does have fourteen lines, and I had a professor of poetry at the university who said that any fourteen-line poem is a sonnet. My sister has won many poetry awards, though, and she disagrees with that, so... I'm no expert. I just write for fun.