Quieted By The Falling Notes Comments

I swirl in the curl Of my free flowing hair My free flowing thoughts Beautiful lines build up tempo of the poem.

It is a lovely poem :) I hear people talk so sweetly about music. I don't really enjoy music with my poor hearing. I sometimes wish my hearing was better because of the wonderful things I hear about music, but as it is music is mostly just a lot of annoying noise for me.

The graceful way in which the title becomes the last line of the poem is so fulfilling and satisfying that I felt I was wrapped up inside the poem. And what a wonderful scene it displays! Morning images, dance images, soul images, images of sound and silence - all this imagery is expressed in the softest imaginable voice. Your poem expresses a deep faith in things which are universal, free, available to everyone. It is only a matter of crossing a threshold and voila the experience of happiness prevails. And the name of this happiness you give in the last line of your Poet's Notes - PEACE. This poem is joining my collection of favorites and it will be my morning mantra!

this is a lovely poem......