Monday, April 20, 2009

Quiet Wisdom Comments

Rating: 5.0

A quiet calm in standing still
comes amidst one's storms of will.
Despair offers only derision;
demands death of every vision.
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Roshni D'Souza
COMMENTS
Raj Arumugam 29 May 2009

hmmm.a little diadatic for my taste and not as vibrant as the other two marvelous poems of yours I have read so far...

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Vaibhav Pandey 20 April 2009

what a beautiful poem ma'm....subtle alliterations give a boost to the poem...10

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Kesav Easwaran 20 April 2009

yes; wisdom always wins...and wins quietly...good meaningful write, Roshni...i liked...10

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