Saturday, August 19, 2006

Quiet Whispers Comments

Rating: 3.0

Quiet whispers of broken truths
Memory lost of blissful youth
Making love by candlelight
Darkness calls me through the night
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A.J. McKinley
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Nyrical Poet 26 March 2007

Wow! ! Excellent flow and use of words! ! ! Very romantic and passionate! It is a 10 for sure; -) Always, Nick

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Lylyanna Pilewski 23 August 2006

Haha Like those last lines. Is this a kissing goodnite/can't stop kisssin goodnite? lol even if it isn't I still like it lol. Lylyanna

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Lesa K 22 August 2006

You have put a lot of your heart in these words... nice job!

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Brian Dorn 19 August 2006

A.J., cross my heart... passionate write. Well done! ! Brian

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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