Dear Berry,
ANOTHER THOUGHT-PROVOKING POEM WITH BEAUTIFUL IMAGERIES AND VISUALS.
Just a thought would it sound better if you re-write'I could never fully/explain' as
' I wish I could /explain'.choice is yours.
Deserves a perfect 10 from me.
Rajkumar
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Dear Berry, ANOTHER THOUGHT-PROVOKING POEM WITH BEAUTIFUL IMAGERIES AND VISUALS. Just a thought would it sound better if you re-write'I could never fully/explain' as ' I wish I could /explain'.choice is yours. Deserves a perfect 10 from me. Rajkumar