Friday, August 21, 2009

Quiet Reflecting Moments Comments

Rating: 5.0

Quiet, reflecting moments
when love seems so estranged...
Hiding in the garden
I see the stars ascend.
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Rajkumar Mukherjee 21 October 2009

Dear Berry, ANOTHER THOUGHT-PROVOKING POEM WITH BEAUTIFUL IMAGERIES AND VISUALS. Just a thought would it sound better if you re-write'I could never fully/explain' as ' I wish I could /explain'.choice is yours. Deserves a perfect 10 from me. Rajkumar

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