Quiet Pretty Flower Comments

this is a lovely poem written with many good lines thanks for sharing

poor nymphaea tetragona pygmaea alba. a truly-captivating retelling of a girl's tortured dilemma. i especially enjoyed this line......Those showers of tears too heavy for your petals. and this..... Is it really being a real woman or your own vulture? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i did think the use of newer was a bit weak in this line......Burn like the phoenix and grow newer from the ashes. ============== a very nice 'first poem' on PH. welcome to the site! thanks for sharing. :) bri p.s. i'll send to MyPoemList.

Oh my God! what amazing poem. awesome. moved my feelings Flower. a White Flower. your words have the mercy of a sharp knife marks 10+