Quiet Night Comments

Like the gleaming barrel of a gun, the clock points at nothing and the crimson sunset leads to another empty, quiet night. empty quite night. your expressions make me think.. thank you dear poetess. tony

Quiet night and isolation all adding to menace. Try out new things, creativity will bloom. In these dark moment.

I like the poem. In particular that is a powerful closing stanza. In the first stanza, it would be " its" twice without the apostrophe. The pools belong to the garden and beauty is a property of the garden, so these are the possessive case and the possessive pronouns never take an apostrophe: its, his, hers, ours, yours, etc.

Great poem, Isolation is hard on everyone, But we will persevere +10