Friday, February 3, 2006

Quiet Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

My emotions
Gushing from a deep and unknown well
Drift through the turbulent ocean
Of this world and dwell
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Tan Pratonix
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Melvina Germain 07 January 2008

A very beautiful poem Tan, I look forward to reading more of your work. Melvina

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trisha evensen 26 April 2006

very nice poem, Tan. How i long to be the woman comprehended.

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Duncan Wyllie 23 April 2006

This is both beautiful and powerful poetry, some of the finest words I have read, a real masterpiece, Love Duncan

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Joyce Chelmo 19 April 2006

The title caught my attention, I've been accused of being quiet, not shy just quiet. I really enjoyed this... again lovely imagery. Red

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Raynette Eitel 14 April 2006

This is a nice one, Tan. Your images are beautiful and mostly fresh. Raynette

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Konjit Berhane 30 March 2006

deep, expressive and nice one Tan thanx for sharing and leting me read it **KoNi**

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Austen Bradford 27 February 2006

great poem- very descriptive, your muse is lucky

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William Jackson 11 February 2006

I like your poems because you have such specific sensory detail which is missing in most contemporary poets' works, including mine far too often.

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