Quiet Girl Comments

So interesting to see yourself (the poet) watching a scene unfold as a different perspective and I liked the way you experimented with that.

an interesting thing to write a poem in third person. i liked it a lot...just dont get used to observing yourself as a third party. it will only make it harder to get in touch with who u are.

Or she takes to hospital those who get cut by others... Nice write, thank you for sharing...

Thats sad and beautiful. I love it, really, really, thats awesome. way better than mine! And i used to think i was kinda good.