Quiet Dream Comments

Well crafted my dear poet. I love it, it is simple and vivid. Thanks 4 sharing such beautiful poem

very intellectual poem/// thanks for sharing it

An insightful inscription has been made incisively on dream touching to. Thanks for translating the poem so nicely.

many women have exhibited a great desire to be raped at least in deams I can't say why but they all confide in me PL DOREAD my bestest poem MOMS SMILES THANKZ

such an insightful poem. went on thinking to understand u really... thankyou liza

Very strong write. A brave outcry! Thanks for sharing Liza.

Nailed on the head, insightful thoughts, need to read between the lines to get it thanks poet

Great piece of writing. Intriguing to say the least. Congrats on poem being chosen! !

'a big amount of wives'.. mm.. men dreams a lot about such a chance.. ;) Indeed, a good deal of those men who live in polygamous societies, where they exert their male-power onto women.. are satisfied with such a living.. since they have also the right to abjure those wifes they don't want anymore.. and 'marry' very young girls.. sometimes kids not even teens..! They think to be 'men', but are only 'males'.. And what about those crazy assassins who blow themselves up, believing they will receive the ''gift'' of 30 virgins when in 'paradise'? They are 'failures' twice.. failed both as men and as human beings..

Congratulations Liza. Although I am unsure of the meaning it is an interesting and unusual write.

perhaps: you better have only daughters and not numerous wives

Thought provoking poem. I am still digesting it's thought. Congratulations for poem of the day.

Glad to have your poem as poem of the day! Mine was on the 8th of this month. Dreams reflect direct at times in life. Nice work.

Congratulations for being selected as member poet of the day for your meaningful poem Quiet Dream Liza.The poem emanates your wisdom and intellect towards such a difficult subject.Wonerfully done Liza

This small poem with its bold narrative running through a dream sequence makes the man under reference a subject matter of psycho-analytical study. Thanks for such a thought provoking poem. Congrats for being selected for the day- Feb 29,2016.

Indeed a quite dream spilling many shades of man.....Nice poem Liza, Congrats for the Poetry of the day...10

Then you said that you better had daughters Than a big amount of wives. You almost started to cry and told that you would have better many daughters than.... change of thinking.. a thinking that leads to purification of the soul. a wonderful poem in short verses. thank you liza

You almost started to cry and told that you would have better many daughters than.... change of thinking.. a thinking that leads to purification of the soul. a wonderful poem in short verses. thank you liza

Dreams at times direct us on the the facts of life. Nice work.

This poem is exquisite taste for me. I enjoyed to read. Thank you so much dearest poet Liza Sud.