Quiet Dawn Comments
The sky still looks dark like night.
Sun is not yet in sight.
Slowly dawn finally breaks
And the amber light spreads
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The sky still looks dark like night. Sun is not yet in sight..................captivating poetic expression dear Bipasha! My pleasure reading it time and again!
such a beautiful poem 10000000+++++ why haven't you posted more u a poetess for sure THE DAWN of a new poetic era
A beautiful creation. I feel inspired by your style of writing. A great piece of art. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
like to quote - I am sitting silently by the window Enjoying the play of light and shadow. Sun was up till now near the horizon. But begins to move to higher position, And quiet dawn becomes a busy morning. Hence, I need to get up and start working. 10+++
it is a wonderful thing to be able to watch the Sunrise, what a sight to see. enjoyed your poem Bipasha. thank you Alan
A marvelous piece beautifully crafted. This poem resonates for me. This is the time of the day when I am most inclined to write.The shimmering rays create a beautiful pattern that will trigger the mind to work wonders. And yes I do agree with you, it is a.great delight to watch, a truly wonder of Mother Nature. A great poem well executed, with great rhyme, as always.10
Beautiful piece of poetry! Lovely expression: I sat silently by the window Enjoying the play of light and shadow. It's a pleasure revisiting this poem!
Masterful composition penned with lucidity and mesmerizing images of beauty. Your insight into the breathtaking loveliness of nature, created by movement of the sun from the crack of dawn to full dawn is impressive. A creative and compelling piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.
A beautiful poem, message of the sun is to get up and be ready for work, the joys will come with the moon and the stars.
It's a fabulous poem! Captivating expression! This poem will go distance and find its readers! ...........10
Slowly dawn finally breaks And the pearly light spreads Paints everything in golden hue Illuminating the sky's blue.... the silence with which u watch the golden rays of the dawn........ this is a fine poetic illustration of the morning......... God remains in silence especiall at dawn and dusk.. thank you dear poetess. for this poem. tony
Hi Bipasha, I have read just a few of your poems. You are a keen observer of nature and have good control over your vocabulary. And, above all, a natural talent for poetry. So nurture it. This one attracted me due to the above charming features: Slowly dawn finally breaks And the pearly light spreads Paints everything in golden hue Illuminating the sky's blue. Vow! ! !
What a sweet little poem! The lucidity of your expression is commendable: I sat silently by the window/Enjoying the play of light and shadow/Sun was up till now near the horizon/Slowly it rises to higher position..Loved reading this elegant piece of poetry!
Now, it is dawn around me in Edmonton. Alberta, Canada. Your elaboration of the dawn is so live to me. Poet, you exposed your inner talent in the poem. Beautiful! Thank you very much for such a poem! 10 for this masterpiece.
Beautifully painted the life from dawn and onward. I could visualize everything when I read your poem. So soothing! So lovely!
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Revisiting this wonderful poem. So vividly portrayed. It gives more pleasure to read for the second time.