Thursday, November 1, 2012

Quiet And Shy Comments

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I am quiet and shy.
I wonder if anyone notices me.
I hear the laughter of my classmates.
I see friends sitting together.
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Emily Boschulte
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Bri Edwards 24 June 2014

if this poem is about YOU, cheer up! i AM weird, and i've succeeded in making it 'ok' to age 66 (well, in another week) . gee! 50 years older than you. if this is NOT about you, you have even more reason, perhaps, for being pleased with the fine job you did creating it! i will send it to MyPoemList. not only do i like the way you explained yourself, but i find no English errors. YAY! i enjoy a poem i can understand, and this seems to be clear enough for me. i like that you repeated the title throughout. perhaps you could profit by carefully-but-boldly reaching out to others to try to fit in without compromising your beliefs/principles. and if that doesn't happen in high school, you have plenty of years left to probe the possibilities! ! good luck with your writing and the rest of your life. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Emily Boschulte

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