Sunday, June 12, 2016

Quiet Afternoon Comments

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A roar above in a windless sky
An engine sounding an alarm goes by
A quiet afternoon of peace?
A chorus of birdsong to release
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 31 October 2016

A buzzing of bees, my head, above..........your quest for the rhyme threw me, with my head out of place! ......................................................................the commas helped me to get it eventually. thanks. favorite lines so far (reminds me of our kitchen counter, now that the rainy and cool season has descended here) : An ant scurries by followed by four A glance to the left reveals many more. May you........always get it... when you need 'slow release', so, instead of being unsettled, ... you'll achieve blessed peace! bri ;)

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