Wednesday, October 14, 2009

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for emalyn

Go and leave
the rain on my eyes
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Beautiful imagery Jazlle. The splinter and the rain need to remain until things are worked through, Your last stanza is excellent. 10 love Karin

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Fay Slimm 15 October 2009

Strong words used here Joan - - may your warm heart never be splintered by hurt - - fine verse - - 10 from Fay

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