Friday, April 27, 2018

Quickie-Being Fat Comments

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Loke Kok yee
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Bri Edwards 19 October 2018

again i pause to add 'my two cents'. There is so much fat, the fat cat would not feel even if a pack of rats were nibbling on his heel. As for dogs, this cat would have no need of fear, as no dog could drag it to elsewhere, far OR near! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 28 August 2018

been here already. put the cat in the oven and call me when it's done! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2018

I'm no cat, BUT i am a dog, and in my mirror i see a hog'. In youth i used to chase a rat: my younger brother; think of THAT! bri :)

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Loke, i have never seen such a fat cat. Great rhyming! fat, cat, rat -threat. I am crowning you as the King of Rhymes as well. :) 100+++

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Loke Kok Yee 12 May 2018

Thank you Geeta, You are always so kind.

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Valsa George 07 May 2018

This is indeed so lovely.... beautifully rhyming and very entertaining too! Your quickies, I admire most! 10+++++++++++++++++++++

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Loke Kok Yee 12 May 2018

I will try and write a few more for you. Thanks Valsa

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Akhtar Jawad 29 April 2018

A wonderful poem about a wonderful cat, enjoyed it.

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Loke Kok Yee 01 May 2018

Thank you sir, just keeping you entertained

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

The cat becoming fat gives wonderful appearance to gain an amazing perception. Dogs are no longer threat. Wise humor is brilliantly expressed in this cleverly penned poem...10

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Loke Kok Yee 01 May 2018

Thank you my friend, nothing like a fat cat for laughs'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 April 2018

Oh my God, i have never seen such type of cat (fat) ever before! You are engaged in discovering very strange funny things! Appreciate your poetic research in a specific direction dear poet! A little fun is always required to get rid of one's mundane life! Thanks for sharing...10

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Loke Kok Yee 01 May 2018

Well, you are seeing one now and I'm glad you like it. Thanks Dr

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