Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Quick Love Comments

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I respond to quick I know I do
But that's just because
I think I may really like you
I know we don't know each other
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Alex Root
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Tom Billsborough 18 May 2016

Good subject and content, Alex. Just be careful of your rhythms. I advise you to read them out loud. just a minor point in what is a very enjoyable piece of work. Tom Billsborough

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