Saturday, October 27, 2018

Queue In Please No Open Heart Surgery Comments

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KEEP HEART OPEN NO SURGERY WILL EVER BE NEEDED

I like your open heart surgery
but in my case I keep my heart open
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

ALL KINDLY IGNORE MY Unwarranted comments made in good faith Read me I shall also read you thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

MAN SAYS having peeled all oranges but I love peaches pulpy and juicy at times organges spurt quickly but love is intrinsic t ones heart it's like apple juice all ao planes while travelling ask but then let us in sureness bask with open heart the doc s won't be afraid to part your heart was already open apart now what and how does it matter if you don't last go home and pack up fast the train to heaven leaves at half past the time you have asked MAN UR A MASTERY MAN

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M Asim Nehal 27 October 2018

Ha ha ha......You peeled all the oranges with your pen, I am afraid to keep my heart open like you especially after watching MERA NAAM JOKER of the great Raj Kapoor. Your poem is brilliant as after a certain age there is no risk in keeping your heart open....10++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

RAJ KAPOOR WAS ALOVELY ACTOR HIS WIFE I LEARN JUST LEFT TO JOIN HIM RIP BOTH I AM IN Q

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Naila Rais 27 October 2018

Is it M. Asim Nehal sir! Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 October 2018

10000000000000000000000 marks lady @18 then dob cannot be 2005 please check it inn ur profile under 18 can't read some poetry

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Naila Rais 27 October 2018

U r having so much probs with my age.... U go n check my dob in school..... Mail them.... I just answered correct bcz u read someone's poetry then compose.... So I just read your recent read poems and your comment..... This much brain every 8 grader have.....

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