Questions When You Cross My Mind Poem by Amateur A

Questions When You Cross My Mind

Rating: 5.0


You don't miss me do you?
But I haven't got a clue
So tell me why
Like the dark side of the moon misses the sun
Like an undone poem misses word string
Like the stars miss darkness in the days
Like the winter beaten birds miss spring
Like dry patchy skin misses moisturizer
Like untreated milk misses pasteurizer
Like the night sky misses blue
oh tell me why? why so dearly do I miss you?

Friday, October 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: yearning
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 02 December 2021

Beautiful love poem nicely put together........

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Indira Renganathan 19 October 2021

Interesting love poem....5*****

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Leann Pilgrim 18 October 2021

I love you poem it's but true I can tell it came straight from the heart and the most beautiful are made from the heart.

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