Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Questions To My Lover Comments

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Can you hear me when I peak
Can you see when I am weak?

Do my tears affect you in any way
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Marissa Gertmenian
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Mohammad Muzzammil 22 December 2010

Yeah, of course. Every beloved bears the same feeling that you have described in this poem. Every girl want to have a worthy boy friend to care her alot. Only her tears make him crazy to do anything. I like both your expression and the message. Nice to read.

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