Monday, August 25, 2014

Questions Repeatedly Asked Comments

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What has made listening to comprehend,
A major undertaking very few do with intent.
Even in the middle of a thought to mention,
For it to come completely with it said...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Douglas Scotney 25 August 2014

despair and disgust, perhaps, if the child is aware ignorance is ahead for itself in adulthood

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Mary Douglas 25 August 2014

there is something very hidden, musically in this poem that is incredible. a person investigating or trying to what is it that is making conversations so false, but a person investigating not scientifically but somehow from behind the lines or within the communication itself. there is a mysterious thread being pulled but not be artifice by really wanting to know what is going on behind all this shape shifting. I love the quality of this poem. Please keep writing all your life. Whether people understand/accept what you are doing or not. This is something real. God Bless... Mary Angela Douglas

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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