Thursday, February 2, 2017

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Do I make your heart skip a beat?
Do I make it hard for you to speak?
Am I so great that you think about me before you sleep?
Have I made you grab faith by the balls and take a leap?
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Jeremy Willson
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Sister Frances 02 February 2017

I like the way you put a fantasy element to the harsh realities of breaking up. Great poem 10+++

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Jeremy Willson 03 February 2017

Thank You sis, I just thought of my life as Down the rabbit hole we go or the Red or Blue pill in the Matrix lol, but it really was depressing so I wrote this and it sorta helped

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