Monday, September 24, 2007

Questions For My Canary Comments

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Speck of yellow, cheery song,
Toothpick legs below,
Sweet canary in a cage,
How much do you know?
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Yen Cress
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Lucianne Fasolo 25 September 2007

I loved this! And the ending was perfect. Great job! :) ' Toothpick legs below' I thought this verse souned so cute. The way you describe things in your poems is very original and gives a special touch to your work.

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