Thursday, May 9, 2019

Questions Before Afterlife Comments

Rating: 4.8

In afterlife will I see the King
with outstretched arms to me
Or will I sail a ship alone
across tawny sands of memories
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Jenny Kalahar
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2020

Will I soar across the cloudless sky with wings, or arms held out to spin and dive Or will my afterlife be a gauzy doorway to a new beginning as yet another newborn child.. praise you dear poetess Jenny for the selection of the wonderful graphic. This theme is now more than ever actual with corona deaths in the world. love. this poem. it touches the core. tony

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Jenny Kalahar 23 March 2020

Thank you for your kind words! Keep safe. Stay well. - Jenny

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Chinedu Dike 13 November 2019

Really a poignant work of art set aside for sober reflection. An insightful creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Jenny.

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Jenny Kalahar 15 November 2019

Thank you so much for your kind words, Chinedu! - Jenny

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Joelle 30 May 2019

This poem is so captivating! ! ! does it have an analysis? ?

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Jenny Kalahar 30 May 2019

Thank you, Joelle! I wrote this after my mother passed away. I wondered if she was given an awareness that included seeing the things I had done, thought, felt throughout my life, and if she was given an understanding of my motivations and fears. And I wondered if when I pass will I be burdened by my thoughts, words and deeds for eternity, or if there is a blanket thrown over the bad and sad of our human existence so that only the good remains with us.

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Will my eyes see colors differently Will I know the secrets of the sages or will it be but dark and dark and dark in silence, endlessly! A soul-stirring poem, so well penned. Hearty Congratulations Jenny!

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you so much, Geeta! - Jenny

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Amir Marandi 17 May 2019

An awesome poem. Very intriguing and thought provoking about afterlife. .Is it really a " new beginning as yet another newborn child" . I do hope so. Congrats for POD and thanks for sharing.

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you for your kind words, Amir! - Jenny

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Prabir Gayen 17 May 2019

Will I soar across the cloudless sky with wings, or arms held out to spin and dive Or will my afterlife be a gauzy doorway to a new beginning as yet another newborn child.. ..deep poem

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you, Prabir! - Jenny

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 May 2019

Awesome flight of imagery that has flown through many colorful imaginations that may occur in life after death. A well deserved poem of the Day. Heartiest Congratulations.

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you for your kind words, Ratnakar! - Jenny

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Jankovic Zoran 17 May 2019

...a new beginning as yet another newborn child... Beautiful poem of sincere thinks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2019

Across the cloudless sky! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you for reading my poem, Edward! - Jenny

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Your Soul knows the answer to this question.Trust in its guidance.Wonderful poem.. a ten from me..

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you kindly, Lorraine! - Jenny

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Savita Tyagi 17 May 2019

Lovely poem on an ever fascinating subject. Congratulations!

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thanks so much, Savita! - Jenny

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Tom Allport 17 May 2019

A thoughtful write of what might be right but then there again it might not?

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you, Tom! - Jenny

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 May 2019

impressive writings on the position of the before and after life /// good belief that everything will there if I make everything goodly here

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Jenny Kalahar 17 May 2019

Thank you, Mahtab! - Jenny

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