Friday, December 27, 2013

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Why can't we grasp each others hands and breathe like siblings?
Why can't we settle together in peace and sing?
Why do we seek power when collectively we are invulnerable?
Why do the powerful yet coward humans harass not strong but only feeble?
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 December 2013

Wow an aweinspiring hardhitting poem food for thought on attitudes! Kudos for d rhymin. I hope u read my latest, on warlords too.

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Mike Barrett 27 December 2013

Rohan, you have a gift....grow your knowledge and polish your skills.....you too could easily become a channel through which God (To me the IT IS) can use to touch other Souls and help them in their eternal growth. God bless.

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Payal Parande 27 December 2013

first of all hi, and now about the poem well i think this poem is remarkable, the thoughts you put into it are very provoking and about the mistakes well they are some but i am pretty you'll make through it since you seem like brilliant young man good luck

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