Friday, October 23, 2009

Questionable Identity Comments

Rating: 3.5

What, not who are you, is the question
On your identity
Though you are an invisible being
The system says you're the body
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Deodath Debideen
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Ejaz Khan 04 November 2009

An interesting write on the resident within, really enjoyed your deep thoughts, the identity we proclaim in any given lifetime, is but an identity perishable, while the real identity remains hidden and it's that what gives rise to seeking and forces us to ponder and outgrow our present state of consciousness, thanks for sharing your thoughts! 10/10 Regards Ejaz

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Indira Babbellapati 01 November 2009

it may take some centuries for us to realize that 'human' is our only identity...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 October 2009

There are many theories about the soul. One theory is while Soul has form and is permanent, the body is formless and it changes every moment. Some say Soul is less than a fullstop or a dot seated in the heart and it can move about freely in and out. The more we think about the Soul, the more our heads break away. Your nice poem has kindled this thought from my mind.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 October 2009

a profound poem on the battle within....lovely

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2009

Go beyond names and forms To find the essence of the soul Now you know why it must be done Soul existence to unfold......go beyound names and fames and this is what is ned of the hour... living in fools paradise will serve no purpose....beautifully crafted poemwith meaningful message to mankind....10 read mine donot garland me.. goback... i am disgrace... pulled from deep sleep...'

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Rakesh Bedi 23 October 2009

A deeply profound poem, sir....regards....

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 October 2009

I value your wisdom. well narrated the obscure things. my request to you is that you may read my poem ' the concept of the soul' and give your points. shan

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