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You, God
Who created me
and the universe
with a billion degrees
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Fred Babbin
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Ahmad Shiddiqi 27 December 2008

inner beauty! keep writing!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 December 2008

This poem has two parts. The first stanza tells how the human being and the universe was created. It is important to note that Poetry was also an ingredient of the creation process, the Rhythm I would say. The second part of the poem consists of several questions relating to God and the man on earth, the aftermath of the creation........A good thought provoking write.

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