Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
Neil Gray
Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
Wednesday, October 4, 2006

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I followed her too work this morning
just to make sure she
got there o.k.
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Joseph Daly 05 October 2006

This is a very imaginative construct. The flow is great and has a deadpan humour to it. I like the way that you use a conversational approach to this. It strengthen the impact of it.

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Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
Neil Gray
Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
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