Thursday, October 10, 2013

Quest Comments

Rating: 4.8

Quest:
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With the crime and cruelty as the call of the day
I get exhausted in today’s thorny world.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 16 May 2014

A quest for the perfect world is ongoing, in the dead of night it seems probable, but with the morning light the possibility disappears from sight. Desiring to fall asleep in a land of deities and fairies searching for wisdom and peace escapes us yet we desire the place that gives no pain or suffering only peace, quietly serene. Wonderfully said. You are an artist who paints in poetical words. Thank you. RoseAnn

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Patricia Grantham 26 December 2013

The blessings of a good nights sleep can put us into a state of bliss. Whether it comes with a dream or not we are still apt to wake up in a world that is full of turmoil and disarray. We have to play our part to make it a better place to live in. Good.

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Hazel Durham 21 October 2013

Quest for peace in a troubled world where serenity will rule supreme! Beautiful write!

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Valsa George 19 October 2013

That would definitely be a state of bliss! But unfortunately, we are able to land in such a place of peace in our dreams, perhaps! As long as we are here in this world, we have to face the turmoil of living! A poem of fertile imagination!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 13 October 2013

Bhagavat Gitam12: 13-14 echoes here.Nice poem

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Heather Wilkins 12 October 2013

your last stanza presents a perfect place in this world to be. may peace prevail someday.

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David Wood 12 October 2013

That sound like the perfect place to be. Lovely poem.

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