Thursday, November 10, 2005

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Directionless as the air, with nowhere to go.
Suspended like a particle with knowledge all around.
Yet unable to bring together things…aside, above and below...
Only capable of carrying the nothingness that is found.
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Vidushi Khera
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 10 November 2005

Good poem, Vidushi.One of your better ones. There are some problems though.Shall I critique?

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