God’s hands
And
My soles
I’ve been walking
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still there is a time, dear kamran bhai, this poem of yours reminded me couple of my poems I once wrote 'My Appeal' and 'The Message'....its a very good write saeen, a piece like 'Shikwaa' written by Hazarat Allama Iqbal...thanks 10+++++ rgds asif
Dear Kamran, your write reminded me of this poem i wrote.... GOD AND I 'I walked, and he strew Thorns in my path I prayed to him To subside his wrath I lied he then Had me caught By being true No good was brought Life I assumed Was a sweet Dream “A nightmare” he fumed And made me scream Exhausted, I ran away To a lonely place He changed the play Pushed me back in race He and I, one on one Can’t stay can’t run “God” what’s your plan Let me live or get me done. ' ....a poem i wrote on a day of distress, when gripped by misery and shut down by fate, that is when we find time to discover ourselves and god, and during these times of contemplation that these poems emerge, about god and his role in our lives.....but this is not a conclusion about god, but just a dialogue with him. I can see what u r trying to say...good write Kamran! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
but i don't think there will ever be a sign board 'you are late' for we knock only when he beckons....and whatever we may say or do, it's all at his beckoning...
wowwwwwwwww what a poem even at God's door u find a signboard really interesting-- another masterpiece by you +++++++10 anjali