Query Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Query

Rating: 5.0


how are you? it is raining blue
where are you? storm may come
home is sweet home in its room
don’t ask me such stuff yet insane

bird flies fast through the wind
into the vale of blue flames
I do aspire by the silence blue
and you slowly descend by the tunes

world when wanders by nature’s blue
cadence of love yet flows elsewhere
echoes still rills on by the hanging cliff
you simply disappear light when intones

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelley L Baxter-stanley 30 April 2008

This truly is a beautiful poem......absolutely full in it's imagery! I love it...truly it is a dream of a poem! You can write so well...so Amazing! Thanx for sharing my friend...... Hope your well,10+++ 'The water girl.......' =) ((Smile))

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Thad Wilk 27 April 2008

A delightful read thought provoking imagery, a great share Dr. Kar! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Abha Sharma 27 April 2008

silence speaks more than the queries...sometimes you get bugged with with such questions... a very effective nature imagery is depicted in your lines...We can easily get lost in the beauty as by reading your poem... I do aspire by the silence blue and you slowly descend by the tunes nice lines.....

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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