Monday, July 26, 2021

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Rating: 5.0

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So much stored
Everywhere
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DASHARATH NAIK
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2022

Yes, it's an excellent poem that expresses your deep concern about something the answer to which has not yet been explored!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2022

So beautiful their hearts So serene their minds So caring their hands So blissful their company But victims they become Of untold crimes....Why? Yes dear Dashrath you have put million dollar inquisition. An excellent poem that express your deep concern about something that has not yet been explored!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2021

I have come back to add: Very intelligently put and worded!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2021

So rich our mother earth So affluent and productive Yet we fight and quarrel Scarcity prevailing War goes on nonstop....Why?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 July 2021

Indeed WHY? Why and why? I have enjoyed this excellent poem, preciously worded.5 Stars full! Thank you for sharing

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