Sunday, October 15, 2017

Quentin: Memorial For A Moron …[ Fiction; Long; Children; Mental Disability; Kindness; Memorial; Zoo ] Comments

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The banker and his wife rejoiced. Their son was born.
As happened at first with boys, blue was the color most often worn …..
by their dear son, Quentin. They doted on him so,
planning for his future. To which college would he go?
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Bri Edwards 15 October 2017

PREVIOUS COMMENTS, LEFT WHEN THE POEM WAS NOT FINISHED BEING TYPED AND SUBMITTED: =================================================== 1 - Bri Edwards (10/9/2017 9: 57: 00 PM) i have typed more of the poem and shall send it to the ones who have already commented. bri :) OK! i'll submit all i've typed as of today, October 9th. it will end with this sentence: The boy had beaten him to it. then there will by more to type. bri ;) ======================================= 2 - Paul Brookes (10/9/2017 3: 22: 00 PM) Blue for the boy pink well I get your drift so chapter one line one...... to be continued intriguing so far ( ================================================== 3 - Bharati Nayak (9/29/2017 10: 35: 00 PM) Does blue color signify something in this poem? I am not sure.All the best for Quentin.God bless him. ====================================== 4 - Valsa George (9/29/2017 10: 29: 00 AM) Eager to see the story unfold.......! ============================= 5 - Laurie Van Der Hart (9/28/2017 1: 30: 00 AM) So this is just an appetizer for the main course? My mouth is watering.. ====================================== thanks for the above comments. the poem is now FINISHED AND COMPLETELY SUBMITTED! ! BRI :)

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