Monday, September 10, 2012

Queen Of Victory Comments

Rating: 4.2

Along the bank of my weakness
Wandering for years, aimless
The more I walk and run
The more I trample future sand!
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Eindaray Kyaw
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Lyn Paul 23 September 2012

Very beautiful writing. Thank you Eindaray

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Aung Si 13 September 2012

Good! No uncertain help is welcome Just wait how I will go that land OK, Just waiting is enough.I'll give u unhelpful and uncertain help.Just kidding! ! !

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 September 2012

The time will bring good news and good things for sure. The Queen here is great to be used. it gives a nice meaning to the poem. you are so talented and great in your work well done.

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So Close 12 September 2012

superb lines....! ! i felt some kind of different feel when i read it....keep writing... »so close«

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