If the twelve of night was a castle of light's,
this be the latern,
to bless tommorow's light,
Sight be the reason why you sparke this night. (till dust till dawn)
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Louis, this is a beautiful poem, full of vivid imagery. There is no closure to a distance when it comes to you and I. Absolutely love that line, it resonates within my heart. Because forever is not never - is another beautiful sentiment you have portrayed and it sits within my mind. Heart warming, just words to a paper also touches and embraces my mind as a poet. Fantastic poem, I give you a 10. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem: Soundless Emptiness, I totally appreciate it. RoseAnn
Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal
Good imagery. The poem gave a full message