Friday, August 10, 2012

Queen Of Hearts Comments

Rating: 4.7

Would it be so unfair
So unjust
To ask you to stay frozen
In your own fiery lust?
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Aria Siren
COMMENTS
Khairul Ahsan 10 May 2017

The title of the poem looks so appropriate! 'I'll lay my cards on the table And play all of the hearts Trading a king for a joker -A joker for a fresh start' - Loved this expression.

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Alla Simone 30 September 2012

The ending- the last two stanzas are a masterpiece. Thanks for sharing.

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Søren Valentine 10 August 2012

O Aria Aria, how i love this poem. very good job! i love the dark tone of this poem. it starts off kind of sweet but takes a turn for the darkness. I LOVE IT!

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