Queen Of Heartland Comments
It takes me back into memory
When she had entered my kingdom already
She was gorgeous queen of my heartland
Ever at peak, it was honor to find her at hand
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Possibly needs to go back to Elementary and take an English course. Benjamin Sunderland19 minutes ago This is slamming words. No finesse... and what's with the flowing flora? How does flora flow? And where do the ants come in? How does one enter a kingdom already? If she did enter his kingdom, at some point in this (loosely spoken) poem, how is she then, near as ever? Quite frankly, I don't think his antenna is that big! The only thing this poem tells me is, this man needs an exterminator! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago normally i respect readers and take their comments seriously.. your comments speaks of bias attitude and poisonous utterances. desist if you can not understand what the poetry is....it is poet's imagination and has nothing to do with reality.. bear one thing in.mind. if you can not contribute, at least do not discourage a person who has world ranking in writing poetry
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It takes me back into memory When she had entered my kingdom already
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