Friday, October 5, 2007

Queen Of Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the Queen
Of mysterious dreams
Visits an hour
Before the dawn,
...
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Uriah Hamilton
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Will Barber 07 October 2007

A beautiful love poem. In sleep, humans are often at their most beautiful - their very vulnerablility is precious. The dreams of dawn are sweetest. - Will

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Sandra Fowler 07 October 2007

From such dreams beautiful poetry is created. If you are Uriah Hamilton, that is... Always your friend, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 06 October 2007

You're usual excellent standard here Uriah. This is a soft and sensuous poem, and a real pleasure to read. Dream on. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Lee Degnan 05 October 2007

Your poem is dreamy... what a beautiful write! And very romantic. Hugs, Lee

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Poison 9901 05 October 2007

Very nice read, I liked the last line the most 'When I saw you At sunrise With sleep Slipping from your eyes, You had already been Lying in my arms In another world, ' This line says that there will be a continuance here. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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