Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Queen Of A Cage Comments

Rating: 4.9

Too careless what's going on all around?
Although in a cage she is kept and bound,
The couple is not free and cannot fly,
When she sees other birds in the open sky,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Bisma Mirza 20 February 2015

Wow... lovely poem...Loved this one... :) 10 on 10

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 February 2015

beautiful words with equal amount of meaming

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Valsa George 19 February 2015

As far as two loved ones are together, they can be happy even in a cage! I watch two finches kept in a cage and hung in our porch! They seem to be so happy together! Enjoyed the poem much!

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Khalid Saifullah 18 February 2015

A beautiful picture of a bitter truth prevailing in a society that is still ruled by the feudal lords...........10

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