Thursday, May 3, 2007

Queen Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember, you were the queen of my land of fantasy,
I was a slave destined to serve you,
And I used to wait and wait long in the queue,
For my turn to come till all else were done,
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Amit Biswas
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Royalty, loyalty, and a well expressed piece of work, Amit....Nice, crisp, tight structure...Smooth tone....good written elocution employed...Solid crafting... FjR

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Amit Biswas

Amit Biswas

West Bengal, India
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