Monday, June 17, 2013

Quatrain The River's Edge Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the river's edge we stand
watching the water flow

you and I holding hands
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Heather Burns
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Wahab Abdul 17 June 2013

wow! very wonderful...here a bit metaphorical too...where is metaphore there i am..lovely...10

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 17 June 2013

beautiful, short but meaningful..truly a nice write.

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