Monday, June 17, 2013

Quatrain Strolling In Meadows Comments

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While strolling in a meadow deep
I came upon my love asleep
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Heather Burns
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Bri Edwards 19 July 2013

i've heard of people telling lies while awake but not while they are asleep. But i guess if a person can talk in hersleep, she can also lie in her sleep. thanks for sharing. i was drawn to the following comment you made about a poem................ we all need a password to our life. then it would not be so easily disturbed. a good write../// i agree! BUT sometimes a disturbance can turn out to be nice, or at least beneficial.

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Wahab Abdul 17 June 2013

very nice poem, very romantic and swift and soft...

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