Friday, November 14, 2014

Quatrain 13 (Rain) Comments

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Paul Sebastian
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Daniel Brick 16 November 2014

Trade-offs, it's always an issue of trade-offs. If there is too much rain, we complain; not enough rain, we complain; ditto for the sun. It's best to surrender to the climate and season and let nature determine the course of things. Then your poem will express the truth in the most elemental way

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Hans Vr 15 November 2014

Good one, Paul. Certainlyvery relevant here in Kelantan where we are in the midst of the monsoon.

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