Monday, March 5, 2012

Quasi-Quatrain Comments

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Quasi-Quatrain

I love monorhyming quatrain from my point of view.
They call it Shairi Quatrain whose form is never new.
Trying to create some variations for poetic life lovers like you,
I hope someday their writers and readers will not be only a few.
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Gordon Tseng
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Soulful Heart 14 March 2012

These surely will not be helpful to your physical purse..................a pinch of salt to the sweet poet..............as usual to the point and clear

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Pranab K Chakraborty 05 March 2012

Use of ' physical purse' is unique but to match the rhyme the trying is very very weak in 'mental nurse'. At the same time, the last two lines are quiet strong by its poetic build with its diction and wisdom. Thank you.

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Gordon Tseng

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