A vast improvement Charlotte, that is really good, I like your choice of words harmonic gates, casting enchanting spells, rythmic river, all these phrases gives the poem a very mystical and surreal quality, keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.
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A vast improvement Charlotte, that is really good, I like your choice of words harmonic gates, casting enchanting spells, rythmic river, all these phrases gives the poem a very mystical and surreal quality, keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.