Thursday, October 22, 2009

Quartet Of Angels Strings Comments

Rating: 5.0

The silky strings of the soft white Goddess
Glide as one towards the entrance of heavens harmonic gates.

She dances smoothly across them in a swift and peaceful motion
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Charlotte Riley
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John Mcmanus 23 October 2009

A vast improvement Charlotte, that is really good, I like your choice of words harmonic gates, casting enchanting spells, rythmic river, all these phrases gives the poem a very mystical and surreal quality, keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing.

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